Insomnia again

[sesquipedality]

I had to exorcise some fiction.

I'm very proud of it. It's Maelstrom related, and also speculative, but I don't think it gives anything away. Mostly because I don't know anything to give away.

It would make me happy if you would read it and tell me what you think.

http://community.livejournal.com/maelspecfic/21116.html

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[idleknight.livejournal.com]

nah, probally the next generation as my character is a good few years older than me and have already done some military service.
However I do have a daughter in character (and a phys-rep for one).